Hey,
After uploading our video to youtube, I decided to post a link on my social media so my friends and family could give us feedback on our thriller opening.
Here is the post that I shared on my Facebook page;
To protect the commenters privacy I have not posted their names. Here are some of the comments that we where given:
"Very good! I enjoyed watching."
"I loved the music, it is atmospheric."
"Loved this! I would say the boy seems like he is being interviewed etc, he needs to be a bit more relaxed, seriously well done!"
"I would say the first piece of music should've started before the first scene begins to create a relaxed atmosphere before the audience has a chance to make assumptions. I think their should've been a bigger pause between the second bit of text we see at the beginning and the first scene, as this allows the audience to really take in and think about what they just read"
"I couldn't understand what they were saying and I didn't get the sense of urgency at the situation. Acting is about embodying the characters - I think your actors needed a little more time to get into their characters"
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This feedback is extremely important to me and my group because it will help us improve for the better next time we do a creative task that is similar. The experience has been an extremely important one and it has been really fun and we have all enjoyed working together.
"Very good! I enjoyed watching."
"I loved the music, it is atmospheric."
"Loved this! I would say the boy seems like he is being interviewed etc, he needs to be a bit more relaxed, seriously well done!"
"I would say the first piece of music should've started before the first scene begins to create a relaxed atmosphere before the audience has a chance to make assumptions. I think their should've been a bigger pause between the second bit of text we see at the beginning and the first scene, as this allows the audience to really take in and think about what they just read"
"I couldn't understand what they were saying and I didn't get the sense of urgency at the situation. Acting is about embodying the characters - I think your actors needed a little more time to get into their characters"
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This feedback is extremely important to me and my group because it will help us improve for the better next time we do a creative task that is similar. The experience has been an extremely important one and it has been really fun and we have all enjoyed working together.
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